Haiku: Listen

in the fading breeze
the wavering lullaby
of the mynah bird

 

Written for Carpe Diem #1139 listening

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5 thoughts on “Haiku: Listen

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  2. I really love the image of “the fading breeze”…it imparts to the reader the sense of a slowing breeze after it’s initial force has already reached its peak. A moment in time captured elegantly. Good job.

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