“It’s empty.”
“No it’s not,” I snapped.
We were trekking through my mind, for crying out loud.
It was not empty.
“The transporter’s faulty,” I grumbled. “It probably sent us into your mind instead. That’s always been empty.”
Abby threw her hands up in the air. “Hey, I didn’t say it was a bad kind of empty. It has a nice ambience to it. Peaceful, like.”
I waved her words away. I wasn’t accepting this emptiness. All my thoughts were hidden away somewhere, and we had to find them. Because until we uncovered that one thought, the thought I’d blocked all these years, justice could never be served.
(Image courtesy of Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo)
Written for Sue Vincent’s Writephoto Prompt: Empty
Oh that’s clever… 🙂
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Thanks Sue
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That’s a great idea for a story. It makes me wish there was more! Have you thought about expanding on it for like a novella?
-MG https://malissagreenwood.com
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I’ve actually been thinking about that. I feel that this should be continued, so I’ve been letting ideas brew in my mind for the last day or so.
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Echo chamber ha ha
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😀
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Interesting. Like it.
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Thanks Sarah, I’m glad you liked it.
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Neat.
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Thanks Pensitivity.
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🙂
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stirs thinking…I like it a lot
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I’m happy that you liked it Gradmama!
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Oh, I like this. This is a concept worth exploring more.
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Glad you liked it Carl!
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Brilliant take on the prompt, Isabel!
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Thank you!
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Short but so inspiring… I really like how the prompt is explored!
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Thanks Dolathyse, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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You’re welcome! ☺
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