Haiku: Spring Equinox

vernal equinox –
as the last winter breeze dies
a pink petal falls

 

Written for Carpe Diem #1184 Spring Equinox (Haru Higan)

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2 thoughts on “Haiku: Spring Equinox

  1. I like the way your haiku could easily shift to the winter equinox – just by removing the words ‘vernal’ and ‘last’ – that pink petal could be from early blossom or a late rose.

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