The child’s room was empty.
There were several playthings, including a music box, a doll house, and a wooden horse rocking to itself in the corner.
But there was no child.
“Are you sure you heard noises?” I asked.
The plump dame in the petticoat was adamant. “Laughing. Toys moving. Children playing.”
I made my way to the dresser, gingerly stepping over a makeshift cradle. “How long have you been running the orphanage, Mrs Grenville?”
“Thirty years.”
“And we’ve never had any trouble before,” she added sternly.
I ran a hand over the music box. Dust was already gathering on the lid. “And how do the children do here? I mean to say, are they content?”
“The children are always very happy,” Mrs Grenville continued. “They are never in want of anything – we make sure of it. And they all get on wonderfully with each other. But Sarah, she never played with anyone else. She was a sick child. We were afraid…”
I examined the dresser next. I could sense a strangeness in the area, but I was having trouble pinpointing it.
“But there were two voices, Mr Harding. Two. They converse with each other. Play together. Every so often I hear nursery rhymes sung in unison.”
“And Sarah is the only child who has ever died in this room?”
“Of course.”
I took one last look around and straightened myself. I had a sinking feeling in my stomach.
Being a spirit hunter was never an easy job, but I was dreading having to tell this woman what I was beginning to suspect.
(To be continued)
(Image courtesy of Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo)
Written for Sue Vincent’s Writephoto Prompt: Child
There definitely needs to be a Part II to this, Isabel. I was really getting into it.
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Oh there will be…I just forgot to put the “to be continued” at the end. 🙂
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Part 2 is now out 🙂 https://isabelcaves.wordpress.com/2017/04/30/flash-fiction-child-part-2/
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I bloody well hope this is to be continued! You can’t leave it like that!!!!
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Hehehe, I already have a few scribbles down for Part 2 🙂
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🙂
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Part 2 is now out 🙂 https://isabelcaves.wordpress.com/2017/04/30/flash-fiction-child-part-2/
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I will be on the lookout for the next chapter.
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I’ll let you know when it’s ready 🙂
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Part 2 is now out 🙂 https://isabelcaves.wordpress.com/2017/04/30/flash-fiction-child-part-2/
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You did set this up for a most intriguing part 2 Isabel, excellent writing by the way..
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Thanks Michael 🙂
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A cliffhanger… Beautiful. The suspense stands throughout. 🙂
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Thanks Robin. I’m just about to post up the second part 🙂
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Part 2 is now out 🙂 https://isabelcaves.wordpress.com/2017/04/30/flash-fiction-child-part-2/
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Thank You! I shall take a look at that. 🙂
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I hope it’s to your liking 🙂
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This was brilliant!
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Thanks Ritu!
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Nice!! Off to check out part ii…
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Thanks Jessica 🙂
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