falling water
putting out the fires
in the trees
(Image courtesy of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai)
Written for Carpe Diem #1160 Kema, birth-place of Yosa Buson
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Isabel Caves 
Such a beautifully different perspective! Loved it. 🙂
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Thanks Kokila 🙂
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your haiku kema
inspired word falls
transcribed with feeling
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falling water
nature working pumping
verdant wonderland
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nature crying
water falling from the sky
trees quenched
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water falling
racing splashing frothy clouds
birds drink on the wing
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comets frozen fly
water carriers new life
new worlds are waiting
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water imbibed
ere millennia gone
whisky on the rocks
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rain drops Angel tears
all that heavy drinking
could be worse
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water falls painting
forming rainbows as it flows
descending jewels
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pear shaped diamonds
water falling from the sky
all life enriched
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water drops lenses
look standing on your heads
inverted world
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nature defying
portrays the world upside-down
natural lenses
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Thank you for the inspiration, will post these on my blog with a pingback, thanks again,
Mick
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Excellent work Mick! I especially love “pear shaped diamonds/water falling from the sky” and the idea of “descending jewels” 🙂
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Thank you appreciated.
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